Saturday, September 1, 2018

1st Place Winner Carolyn Sanders Memorial Award WHITE COUNTY WRITER'S CONFERENCE


              This entry is a true story documenting one of the last days of my lovely sister-in law, Dorinda.  



Stormy Night



     “I’ve got her all set. She’s had her meds, so she should be comfortable. Try to get her to eat something and make sure she keeps drinking water.” The hospice nurse gave last minute instructions. “Watch her oxygen tubes. She should be fine until morning.”

     The house was quiet except for the droning of the AC unit pumping cool air and keeping the hot, Louisiana summer night at bay. In the master bedroom, the soft hum of the electric oxygen generator lulled all into a false sense of security.

     Roy escorted the nurse to her car and hurried back to his charge. The frail figure in the hospital bed barely resembled his beautiful wife of over 40 years. Cancer had ravaged her body for almost a decade. She had her lung removed and endured chemo and radiation. She’d fought and won at one point, going into remission for over 6 months. It seemed a cruel joke. Just as Dori regained her strength and resumed her life, the cancer returned with a vengeance. Now she struggled for every breath. Tumors ravaged her body, crowding her single lung, liver, and abdomen.

     “What can I do for you?” Roy’s sister San asked, standing by the bed.

     “My skin is so dry it hurts. Can you find some lotion that’s unscented? I can’t stand the smell.” Dori croaked from under the covers.

     “I have some unscented face lotion for sensitive skin,” San spoke up. Let’s see if you can tolerate this.” San held the open bottle under Dori’s nose.

     “Yeah, that’s okay,” Dori mumbled.

     San lifted the light blanket to reveal Dori’s emaciated legs. Carefully, so as not to disturb the life-giving oxygen tube, she rubbed liberal amounts of lotion into Dori’s dry skin. It absorbed the lotion like a sponge. “The nurse said you need to eat. What would you like? I’ll make you anything you want.” San spoke softly as she massaged Dori’s bony feet.

     “I don’t think I can eat.”

     “I’m here to make whatever you want. Isn’t there something, anything you think you could hold down?”

     “Ok. How about some dry toast. No butter.”

     “Dry toast it is.” San scurried to the kitchen while Roy propped Dori up on a mountain of pillows. A rumble of thunder announced the approach of a summer storm.

     San quickly returned bearing a paper plate with two pieces of dry toast. Dori smirked. “You didn’t cut the crust off.”

     “I didn’t know you wanted it all fancy.” San’s comment dripped with sarcasm.

     Dori grinned, looking like her old self for a moment. “You should know I like everything fancy.”

     It was an accurate statement. Dori had always been well-put-together; her flaming red hair coiffed, nails manicured, make up perfect. Her long, delicate fingers were typically adorned with sparkling rings. Roy enjoyed buying jewelry and Dori loved wearing it. Rings, gold chains, bracelets, pendants of precious and semi-precious stones, and earrings in all shapes and colors occupied her large jewelry armoire. Presently, Dori’s only adornment consisted of a paper hospital band around her thin wrist.

     A flash from outside drew their attention. “Wow. The storm’s getting closer.” Dori reacted to the lightning. The following clap of thunder sounded louder than before.

     “What are you girls gabbing about?” Roy entered with Dori’s water mug. “All filled up.” He smiled and took his wife’s gaunt hand. “Think I could grab a shower while you two talk?”

     Dori waved him off. “Go ahead. We need to catch up anyway.”

     San nodded to her brother. “We’re good. I’ll holler if I need anything. Take a shower.”

     San watched as Dori struggled to draw the liquid up the straw. “Having a little trouble?” She reached over to loosen the top of the mug. “Try that.”

     “That’s much easier. Thanks.” Dori whispered.

     “I heard that your brother Bob came for a visit today.” San propped herself up on the bed next to Dori’s hospital bed.

     Dori frowned. “It was awful. He just sat by the bed trying not to cry. I felt like I had to carry the conversation and I just don’t have the energy. He’s depressing.” She chuckled, in spite of the graveness of the situation. “Talk to me San. Tell me about the book you’re working on.”

     Often berated for her gift of gab, San launched into an animated description of the fantasy novel she was writing. Dori commented from time to time as she nibbled on her toast, even laughing at San’s antics. After a few minutes, a shirtless Roy appeared in the doorway.

     “It’s nice to hear her laugh.” He commented to his sister while pulling on a t-shirt. Lightning cracked outside, immediately followed with a boom of thunder that shook the house. “The storm is getting worse. Let’s hope it blows over.”

     Dori yawned widely. San rescued the water mug as her head sagged. “Let’s let her get some sleep.” She motioned to her brother.

     They tip-toed to the living room. “She probably won’t sleep long.” Roy collapsed into his recliner. “You might want to get some rest while you can.”

     “Oh, you know me. I can stay up all night.” San clicked on the television. The blue screen indicated a lost satellite signal. “The storm,” she sighed. Rain pelted the windows. Flashes of lightning lit up the night. The old house trembled with the resonating thunder. The lights blinked. San looked to Roy with raised eyebrows.

     “I’d better find a flashlight, just in case…” Roy’s shoulders slumped when the house went dark. “Shit.” He sprang from his chair. “I’ve got one right over here.” He fumbled in the dark for a moment, finally coming up with a flashlight. “There’s another one in the kitchen.”

     San edged her way to the kitchen in the darkness. Roy followed with the light. They rummaged through the junk drawer to find a second flashlight.

     “Roy.” Dori’s feeble call was barely audible over the din of the storm.

     Racing to the bedroom, they found Dori gasping for breath. “Dammit. The oxygen.” Roy rushed to Dori’s side.

     “Up,” she gasped. “Can’t breathe.”

     He punched the button on the hospital bed. “Dammit. There’s a manual crank under here somewhere.” San reached out to pull Dori forward as Roy stacked pillows behind her. While he searched for the crank, San found a small battery-operated fan. She placed it on the rolling table to blow directly into Dori’s face.

     “Better.” Dori croaked. “This hurts.”

     “I can’t see shit.” Roy’s fear and irritation was showing.

     “I’ve got a camp lantern in my Jeep. I’ll go get it.” San started for the door. “You okay for a minute?”

     “Yeah. I gotta have some light.” Roy nodded.

     San burst out the front door into the storm. Two steps off the porch, she was soaked. She ran to her vehicle, retrieving the lantern. In less than ninety seconds she was back, dripping on the carpet. The lantern lit up the room, but Dori was clearly in pain.

     Roy held Dori up. With San’s help, he found the crank to adjust the bed but it did little to alleviate Dori’s distress. Lying back, Dori couldn’t get enough oxygen for a breath. Pulled or propped forward, she could catch a breath, but leaning forward compacted the tumors amassed in her body. She was in a lot of pain. To make matters worse, Dori began vomiting.

     San held Dori in her arms, pulling her forward to get a breath, wiping her face with a cool washcloth. Dori could only remain in that position for about thirty seconds. She took a couple of breaths, then nodded for San to lower her back down. After about a minute in recline, San had to lift Dori again to get another breath. They soon found a rhythm. Thirty seconds up, then down. While Dori reclined, San cleaned the dark stains from her shirt front. The humidity and temperature began to rise rapidly.

     While San tended to Dori, Roy was on the phone with the hospice nurse. She was an hour away, in fair weather. The massive storm would triple that. He fumed and fussed but was ultimately appreciative that she was coming back.

     Dori’s vomiting spell only lasted a short while. She didn’t have much in her stomach, after all. Roy took over for his sister. Lift forward for thirty seconds, lower for one minute, lift for thirty seconds, lower for one minute. San fanned furiously with her notebook to stir the air. In a few minutes, she was drenched with sweat, adding to the damp from her dash into the storm. Perspiration dripped off the tip of Roy’s nose as he lifted and lowered his ailing wife.

     The temperature in the house rose to a sweltering, sticky ninety degrees. Lift forward for thirty seconds, lower for one minute, lift for thirty seconds, lower for one minute. For ninety minutes Roy and San took turns helping Dori breathe. Lift for thirty seconds, lower for one minute.

     The storm lashed the old house with wind and driving rain for what seemed an eternity. Eventually, the rain ceased and the rumbles of thunder rolled into the distance. There was little conversation as Roy and San continued; lift for thirty seconds, lower for one minute, lift for thirty seconds, lower for one minute.

     Finally, the lights blinked on as the power was restored. The hum of the AC was a welcome sound but the soft drone of the oxygen generator was a gift from God. Roy placed the cannula back on Dori’s face. She visibly relaxed as she received the oxygen. With San’s assistance, he changed Dori’s soiled shirt. They turned on three fans to stir the air and cool Dori’s room as quickly as possible. When the hospice nurse arrived, a full three hours after Roy called, San hugged her.

     The nurse administered nausea and pain meds to make Dori comfortable. Once Dori was settled, she eased into the living room to get a full accounting from Roy and his sister. The nurse found them both asleep, San on the sofa and Roy in his recliner. Exhaustion had overtaken them.

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